February 16, 2009

Rainy Day

He yawned and looked out of the window, it was a dull gloomy morning. It was raining continuously for the past few days, so he had little time to go out and get some fresh air. He hated the touch of rain to his skin. But he longed for the wind to rustle his grey air. He longed for it to throw a stray leaf at him that made him blink. So he stretched, went out and sat by Sheila on the veranda. Away from the reach of the spatter. She looked at him with love in her ginger eyes. The look that still gave him shivers from head to toe. They had been together for the past eight years. Since she separated from her husband, to be precise. They had a loving coexistence. He couldn’t believe someone could love him as much as she did. It felt like she was a different person when she was with him.

He knew because he had followed her unnoticed to her shop a few times. He had seen her sit there alone, her head resting on her palm. Waiting for the next customer to walk in. He had seen her with her customers, trying to look cheery and make small talk, with an ounce of sadness still hanging in her eyes and making her look older than she really was. He had seen her checking the time over and over again for hours till it was finally time to close shop. But when she got back home, it seemed that all the love in her consumed her and became the person she was. She would smile, she would talk, she would be a different person altogether. She was wonderful.

He inched closer to her and nestled next to her chair. She rested her palm on his back. They both sat together and looked at the rain in silence. There used to be a time when she would talk her heart out to him, and he would just listen. He prided himself at being a good listener. And when she talked, he could feel the comfort it gave her to let out like that. She didn’t talk much nowadays. Just the occasional you-know-what-happened-todays. But he knew that didn’t matter. It was just age.

She had been married 36 years when her husband met a younger woman and decided to give his hormones a second chance. Their only child had long grown up and settled down in a far off land. He never visited her. Her man left her with her little boutique, money enough to buy a new house, and plenty of humiliation. That was all she had now, apart from her grey haired fellow.

She met him outside the grocery store one morning, a month after her divorce. He used to idle there in the morning when people came to get their daily supplies of milk. It was she who first came and talked to him that day. Within an hour they became friends. And then she started seeing him there every morning, without fail. A few weeks later he started visiting her at her place, and then eventually moved in with her. Time flew by, and they became the most important part of each other’s lives. He liked both owning her this way and being owned by her. They were inseparable. She might have grown old, but to him, she was just as beautiful now as she was when he first laid eyes on her.

It was almost lunch time. She was already inside, setting the table, while he took a few more minutes to laze by himself. He inhaled the air, spiced with the smell of her delicious chicken curry and felt pleased. She was an incredible cook. He would have lunch and then catch a few winks. There wasn’t much for him to do. After all, there’s hardly much to do for an old cat when it’s raining outside.

Inspired by Geetanjali Rao's Printed Rainbow

13 comments:

Unknown said...

haven't read but damnnnnnn sure it'll be gr8..........so keep up d gud work......'ll read sum other time!!!!
richa(cheshta's sis)

Unknown said...

You came here.. and wrote me a comment without reading the story?? Padh toh leti!

Unknown said...

hey sanchari again I would say you ahve written awonderful piece.I really enjoyed reading it. Lots of curisioty was there and was waiting for what is going to happen at the end.......Keep it up. it motivates you to read till end.

inveter8blogger said...

Well, I kinda expected a little more from it. Sort of expected an "ending". It's just a description, and sounds like it is part of a bigger story.
What I mean is, it seems incomplete.
The description by itself is a flowy one, very calming. But that was what I guess made me expect a sudden end. Something that would take us by surprise.

Unknown said...

@Deep Thanks Mam..

@inveter8blogger I'll keep that in mind when I write the next piece.. thanks for the comment :)

Unknown said...

excellent story dear..gud kp up the gud wrk....all the best
Almas

Unknown said...

but the end should be more appropriate i guess...its jus a suggstn...u mite kno bttr about it i guess..so xcuse me if my understanding is wrong....

Espèra said...

Oye, that was me. Inverter8blogger.
Sorry, galat id se logged in tha.

Dan V. said...

Off-topic:

Sorry about writing here, I wasn't able to find your e-mail anywhere, but I wanted to ask you about something - how did you manage to add the dates (day, year) to the posts on this Blogger template?

I also use the Red Stamp template on my blog since September - a modified version, though. However, the date is still puzzling me...

Thanks in advance!

P.S: You can leave me a reply here or on my blog, through another comment, or on my mail (vamanudan at yahoo dot com). Cheers, mate!

Unknown said...

@ Almas

Thanks.. No I dont know better about it.. It's just my second peice.. So I'll keep it in mind next time.. I guess I just get impatient by the end

@ zid

Well you just go to the layout part on the dashboard, and play around with the blog posts widget.. that does it :)

S A J I T H said...

Climax took me by surprise,Intersting!! Do spend little time in formatting ur blog..like justify full etc, just to give a clean look..
cheers..keep writing..

~sajith~

mugdha said...

very well written chaari! lucid, smooth and interesting! good job i say!

P.S. Printed Rainbow has to be the most beautiful thing i've ever seen! you have a copy? my prof just wont let us copy from the original! :(
anti-piracy my foot! :D :P

surbhit said...

awesomely written, i would read the other posts soon, but this story seems similar to me, i know someone living the same kinda life...
nyc post